I am Learning to make Reviews and get Better at it.

The story is about a girl that she was late for school again and when she went to school with her bike and she fell off the bike, cozmo the family dog was very smart he ran to Harriet's father and told him to come and pick her up from the ground because she can not stand because the bike went on her and she took it of.

Story Review

We are learning to write story reviews about stories that we have read during the week

This story is called "From Corned Beef to Captain Cook" and it is about a boy named Michael Tuffery. He didn't know how to read,  write and spell. When he was eight he didn't know much about his reading, writing and spelling so he had to go to a very special class because he had dyslexia. He went to a class where it is hard for him  to learn and in the book he didn't know how to read the right way round so he would draw instead.

Story Review

Birthday Visit

This story is about a Birthday visit and its about Jemma's brother who is in prison and it is his Birthday and he did lots of the things that he liked.

The characters in this story are Tim, Mum, Jemma and the guard.

This story takes place in prison.

Jemma and her Mum went to prison in Dunedin because It was her big brothers birthday.

Jemma was scared when they reached the prison because it was dark.

The guard asked Jemma and her mum to wait in line when they had  

given their names to the guard.

Jemma took a card for her brother in the prison.

Jemma was feeling nervous when she walked down the long room to the

seats