Birthday Visit
This story is about a Birthday visit and its about Jemma's brother who is in prison and it is his Birthday and he did lots of the things that he liked.
The characters in this story are Tim, Mum, Jemma and the guard.
This story takes place in prison.
Jemma and her Mum went to prison in Dunedin because It was her big brothers birthday.
Jemma was scared when they reached the prison because it was dark.
The guard asked Jemma and her mum to wait in line when they had
given their names to the guard.
Jemma took a card for her brother in the prison.
Jemma was feeling nervous when she walked down the long room to the
seats
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